Shankaracharya's commentary, trans. Alladi Mahadeva Sastry (1897)
[1]Not by abstaining from action does a person reach the actionless state; nor does he attain perfection by mere renunciation.
BG 3.4
न कर्मणामनारम्भान्नैष्कर्म्यं पुरुषोऽश्नुते । न च सन्न्यसनादेव सिद्धिं समधिगच्छति ॥
na karmaṇām anārambhān naiṣkarmyaṃ puruṣo 'śnute | na ca saṃnyasanād eva siddhiṃ samadhigacchati ||
"Freedom from karma's bonds does not come from inaction. Perfection does not come from mere renunciation."
5 translations · all pre-1928 or released to public domain · sources
Not by abstaining from action does a person reach the actionless state; nor does he attain perfection by mere renunciation.
Not by abstaining from action does a man reach the state of non-action; nor by mere renunciation does he attain to perfection.
Not by refraining from action does a man attain freedom from action; and not by mere renunciation does he arrive at perfection.
Not doing, O Arjuna! avails not; Not inaction wins to peace; Not by renouncing world is bliss achieved, But by strong deeds nobly done.
Not by avoiding actions does a man obtain freedom from action; nor does he reach perfection by mere renunciation.